First paragraph for this semester is telling about one of my best classmates..
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| Dwi Arie Megawati |
I have a very close friend whom I knew her since my first
semester in English Department of HAMKA University. Her name is
Dwi Arie
Megawati and I usually call her Ega. She has been my classmate for these five
semesters. As far as I know, she is a nice, cute, careful, friendly, and
independent girl. I obviously proud of her because she’s a hard worker. She loves
to work to have a lot of experiences and to be independent in her life. She used
to have a bad habit. She used to come late to every events or classes she had,
but now she often comes earlier after her family moved house to more distant. She’s
also a movie addict. She likes watching movies to fill her night when it’s hard
to sleep; therefore, she such an insomnia girl. She likes jokes very much, but
sometimes she can be a terrible moody girl that I don’t like if it
happens.
However, she’s the cutest friend I ever met because none of my friends
like her.
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5 comments:
That is a good posting!
May I leave a comment?
Because that is a writing product, I think it will be better for you to do not use a contraction (of to be). :)
of course u may..
everyone may leave their comment here..
heem.. i see.. (totally forgot about that) :p
okay nabila.. tanx 4 comment y dear..
that's g'd point nabil, but em the exception ya hehe. It's ok if I keep usin' that here. Agree, avoid that when u deal with formal writing, yet it still can be tolerated:-)
Interesting and really neat writing, Ika. Moreover, u also clearly analyze each part of paragraph u make. Thus, u already tried to use different type of sentences. Glad to read this. Please use more varied and elegant vocabularies in the next writing. Excellent.
okay miss..
yeaay... that's still tolerated.. =D
I will try miss. Less of vocabularie makes me prefer to use common vocabularies I knew in order to avoid error meanings / understanding. hhehe..
Do tanx a bunch for comment and correcting my writing miss. that means much to me to improve my writing skill.. (n_n)
I'm just laughing by myself while reading this story *blushing* thanks a billion dear :)
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